Video
https://photos.app.goo.gl/Hsi9qmew4X6aGmkk8
The feedback I got was I should better describe the application and how a user would interact with it. I think it is good feedback, providing some indication of how it will be presented to the user can help the person listening to the pitch to understand the uses of it.
Reflection:
Based on that feedback I have added some more information on the form and use of the application to the pitch. The pitch was not quite memorized, however, I think I spoke more comfortably when doing it this time compared to my previous attempts. My pitch is much better than my first draft after adapting it to receive feedback.
Hey Justin,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job on your third elevator pitch. I really could understand what your product was and how to use it from the way you described it. I think that you also seem more comfortable in front of the camera, like you said. Again, I really like your business idea and I think it could be really successful!